Five Sentence Fiction – Stargazer

Though beaten and bruised, she never lost her shine in his eyes. Hers was the name that came forth in his dreams and nightmares alike. He would never forget how she felt under his touch, or the way she would move for him and him alone. How she had shaped him into the man he was today, proud but humble and thankful of everything she had taught him. And though they years had taken their toll, the honored name of Stargazer stood out above all.


Another entry for this week’s Five Sentence Fiction from Lillie McFerrin, but one that takes a bit of sci-fi knowledge to see. I wonder how many will know whom the two characters are here…

Either way, I hope you all enjoy!

2 thoughts on “Five Sentence Fiction – Stargazer

  1. deanabo says:

    This is beautiful

  2. Mayumi-H says:

    She may have always been ready to fly apart at the seams, but he never forgot her. 😉

    Nice look into the mind of a man looking back on his past.

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