Five Sentence Fiction: Abandon

5 thoughts on “Five Sentence Fiction: Abandon

  1. Abandoning ship, always the most devastating of losses…

  2. That’s for sure a devastation and you’ve injected your interpretation coupled with emotions.

  3. Oooh, great take on the prompt.

  4. Deboshree says:

    Loved this take on the prompt! The grief and loss is palpable.

  5. Mayumi-H says:

    This is a great take on the prompt word. I love the near-anthropomorphism of the ship, here, too. You always do such a great job with projecting and evoking emotion for a vessel. Well done!

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